Sunday, June 21, 2009

Rain

I love rain, I love the pitter patter you hear when you sit next to the window. Rain is lovely it helps me fall to sleep at night I listen to the glorious rain, it soothes me. The rain falls down on the grounds and annoys some people to me rain is the most greatsest gift the sky gives to us. Rain rain rain.

1 comment:

  1. I love rain too.
    Some feedback:
    Try not to say "most greatest" as this is a double superlative and you can't superlatives together like that. Superlatives are words like Most, Best, Greatest. They are words that mean the maximum of something.
    Of course, I could be wrong... let's go back to our class blog to check out if there are any links there to grammar learnging so we can check and maybe prove me wrong...

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